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Lail, this is so brilliant! And so, so funny. Wonderful job — I feel like this is a masterclass in monorhyme in song. Every line is unique and poignant — incredible.

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Ha thank you, delighted to read this!!

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So good to see Ginger Again!

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👯‍♂️

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Hi. Great tale Lail. Tried to like but substack said there was a problem. Anyway... consider it 👍

Take and don't worry!

Paul

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Thanks and no worries !

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What an extraordinary text!

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Ha, why thank you!

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..so you're actually a poet?

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..and I didn't even know it?

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Love!!!!!!!!!!! The exit poll/eight ball line. So so good.

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Haha thank you cuz!

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Love the song!

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Yay!

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