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Fog Chaser's avatar

Lail, this is so brilliant! And so, so funny. Wonderful job — I feel like this is a masterclass in monorhyme in song. Every line is unique and poignant — incredible.

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Lail Arad's avatar

Ha thank you, delighted to read this!!

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Ron's avatar

So good to see Ginger Again!

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Lail Arad's avatar

👯‍♂️

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Paul Rivington's avatar

Hi. Great tale Lail. Tried to like but substack said there was a problem. Anyway... consider it 👍

Take and don't worry!

Paul

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Lail Arad's avatar

Thanks and no worries !

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Jeanette's avatar

What an extraordinary text!

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Lail Arad's avatar

Ha, why thank you!

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Jeanette's avatar

..so you're actually a poet?

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Lail Arad's avatar

..and I didn't even know it?

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Galia Arad's avatar

Love!!!!!!!!!!! The exit poll/eight ball line. So so good.

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Lail Arad's avatar

Haha thank you cuz!

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Silvija Jestrovic's avatar

Love the song!

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Lail Arad's avatar

Yay!

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